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I Loved You First

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I was enough for you so long ago
I was your everything – you told me so
And you’re still the world to me, just so you know

Time changed so much since the day that we met
But there’s something I don’t want you to forget

I loved you first

I can still feel you – I still see your face
Here in the shadows of this empty space
And your voice still echoes in this haunted place

It wasn’t long enough to last forever
But there’s something I want you to remember

I loved you first

I was enough for you once upon a time
You said I was everything, but that was a lie
And though you said forever then left it behind
I want you to remember every once in a while

I loved you first
Simple and pure
And a piece of my heart
Will always be yours
From the first time we touched
To the last kiss goodbye
I loved you then
As I will ‘til I die



I loved you first
And I will ‘til I die
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BlazeGuarnere's avatar
This is a poem that moves the heart, and I know a lot of people can definitely relate to it (including myself). Nice work! :)