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Hush said the angel
Don't be lonely anymore
I'm here right beside you
Like so many times before
Time and again
I'll be here to fill your heart
Tonight I'm gonna show you
We're never far apart

Hush said the angel
You can tell me like it is
'Cos I'm not here to judge you
All I offer you is this
Time and again
I'll be here to fill your dreams
Tonight I'm gonna show you
Love is closer than it seems

Let me carry you
Let me be the one
Let me carry you
I can be the one
Let me care for you
I can heal the pain until it's gone
Let me carry you so you can carry on

Let me carry you so you can carry on
I wrote this for someone very dear to me. It's somewhat hymnal, I think, which is kinda what I was going for; spirituality.
As a piece, it's about asking someone if they will give you a chance and promising you'll be with and take care of them regardless of distance, time or anything else; helping that person whenever they need it, guiding them.
I personally think this is one of my better works.
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AnnaBellLee17 Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Student Writer
this is fabulous!
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:iconvsyo-vremya:
vsyo-vremya Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Professional Writer
Ahaha. Thank you ^_^
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AnnaBellLee17 Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Student Writer
you're welcome.
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LightFromAPhoenix Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I can imagine this as a song all too easily; it's so rhythmic and flow so beautifully. Outstanding work!
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:iconvsyo-vremya:
vsyo-vremya Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Professional Writer
Thank you! :3
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Randomization1998 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this is beautiful, I've written things like this for friends before.....I think your friend is lucky to have you :huggle:
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:iconvsyo-vremya:
vsyo-vremya Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you :) 
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:iconmika-ryoko:
Mika-Ryoko Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013   Writer
I agree. this is a verry good peice; written with exceptional clarity. It does read much like a hymn.
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:iconvsyo-vremya:
vsyo-vremya Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Professional Writer
It's probably the only hymn-esqué thing I've ever written. Or probably will write, if I'm honest.
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:iconmika-ryoko:
Mika-Ryoko Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013   Writer
You did a very good job for it being the only hymn-esque thing you plan on
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:iconvsyo-vremya:
vsyo-vremya Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you :)
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:iconmika-ryoko:
Mika-Ryoko Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013   Writer
of course ^^
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rodriguez1234 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
Love it
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:iconvsyo-vremya:
vsyo-vremya Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you :)
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:iconrodriguez1234:
rodriguez1234 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
Your welcome do you mind if I copy it in a notebook
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:iconvsyo-vremya:
vsyo-vremya Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Professional Writer
As long as I get full credit for it. That's my only condition :)
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rodriguez1234 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
Ok :)
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Germany1177 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Student General Artist
Thinks of me and my best friend....
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:iconvsyo-vremya:
vsyo-vremya Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Professional Writer
:)
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Germany1177 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Student General Artist
^^
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:iconvsyo-vremya:
vsyo-vremya Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Professional Writer
:)
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jazzjazz1 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
-squeaks- prettyful
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:iconvsyo-vremya:
vsyo-vremya Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Professional Writer
<3
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jazzjazz1 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:3
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:iconvsyo-vremya:
vsyo-vremya Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Professional Writer
:meow:
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jazzjazz1 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
-huggie-
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:iconvsyo-vremya:
vsyo-vremya Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Professional Writer
*hug*
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jazzjazz1 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Mew
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:iconvsyo-vremya:
vsyo-vremya Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Professional Writer
Mewtwo
:3
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ImChangingMahName Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
There aren't words which I can use to describe how much I love this :D
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:iconvsyo-vremya:
vsyo-vremya Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Professional Writer
That means a lot
Thank you
:3
<3
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:iconimchangingmahname:
ImChangingMahName Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
No problem. :)
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:iconvsyo-vremya:
vsyo-vremya Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Professional Writer
:3
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JaqueDark Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
Very beautiful PJ... I don't think it comes across as something for when you're feeling low though... it seems more optimistic really
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:iconvsyo-vremya:
vsyo-vremya Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you
:)
And I think it's down to individual interpretation
That's usually what I aim for
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RabeaUmbra Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice, expessially for those days that you're feeling low.
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:iconvsyo-vremya:
vsyo-vremya Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Professional Writer
I'm glad you think so :)
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Raksha0druid Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013
In love with this song.
Beautiful work
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:iconvsyo-vremya:
vsyo-vremya Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you! :3
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MisMatchedSockGirl97 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is beautiful.
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:iconvsyo-vremya:
vsyo-vremya Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Professional Writer
Do you really think so? Thank you :)
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:iconmismatchedsockgirl97:
MisMatchedSockGirl97 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, I do.
You're welcome.
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:iconvsyo-vremya:
vsyo-vremya Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Professional Writer
<3
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