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Who said it would be easy
Who said it wouldn't be hard
Who said it would be simple
Who said it wouldn't leave scars

What I've got to give you is less than you deserve
But would it make a difference if I promised you the world

Who said it won't be painful
Who said it wouldn't break
Who said it would be perfect
Who said it's a mistake

Words can only say so much before it's hard to breathe
But would you understand me if I said you're all I need

Looking from the outside in
Some things never change
Looking from the inside out
Some things stay the same
I don't know what will happen
When or why or how
I can't see the future
But I can be there for you now

I can't tell you where to go
Because that's up to you
I don't know the road ahead
I can't pretend I do
It's hard for me to say it
And it's harder to believe
But I'll be there beside you
If you will wait for me



...Will you wait for me?
First installment of a trilogy. Watch this space. 
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NicholasName Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hands down one of the most heartfelt, sharp, and straightforwardly awesome yet metaphorically beautiful poems I've read in a while. :)

I like the rhythm and the form. Very good job! :D 
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vsyo-vremya Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Professional Writer
Aww. Thank you :) 
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NicholasName Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome. :D 
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vsyo-vremya Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Professional Writer
<3
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NicholasName Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:) 
I like your ID name.
'vsyo-vremya'.... all the time. 
Very nice. :D
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vsyo-vremya Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Professional Writer
Thank you. I chose it myself :P
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NicholasName Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome. :D 
It's very interesting. 
(And Russian! ;P )
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:iconvsyo-vremya:
vsyo-vremya Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Professional Writer
Yes. Yes it is :3
And thank you :)
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AnnaBellLee17 Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Student Writer
:clap: 
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vsyo-vremya Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Professional Writer
:D
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AnnaBellLee17 Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Student Writer
lovely
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:iconvsyo-vremya:
vsyo-vremya Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Professional Writer
Thank you ^_^
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AnnaBellLee17 Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Student Writer
you're welcome.
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SpectrAbyss Featured By Owner May 1, 2014   Writer
Great job. I really liked this. Makes you wonder. :)
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vsyo-vremya Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Professional Writer
Aha. Thank you :)
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21plights Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014   Writer
very inspiring, in the sense that it gives the mind room to wonder,a joy to read and reflect on.Thank you
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vsyo-vremya Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Professional Writer
No; thank you :)
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Jenny345 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
Nice.
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:iconvsyo-vremya:
vsyo-vremya Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Professional Writer
Thanks :)
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Jenny345 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
You're welcome.
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MyLittleSquirrelGirl Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
It's alright, I think you did a great job on this and if you need someone, I'm here.
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vsyo-vremya Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Professional Writer
Aww, you're sweet. Thank you :) 
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MyLittleSquirrelGirl Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Welcome.
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ArenaDeborah Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
amazing  i will wait you just that you" come" Clap 
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lacahrrs Featured By Owner May 5, 2014
I can't tell you where to go
Because that's up to you
I don't know the road ahead
I can't pretend I do
It's hard for me to say it
And it's harder to believe
But I'll be there beside you
If you will wait for me
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ArenaDeborah Featured By Owner May 5, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
i will wait for you Love 
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lacahrrs Featured By Owner May 5, 2014
till I will take you there dear
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ArenaDeborah Featured By Owner May 5, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
joke is nice but then ends the joke is great when short and if you have a girlfriend stop being the idiot on the internet and cute little towards your woman U.U
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ArenaDeborah Featured By Owner May 5, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
no thank you 
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